This entry is from David, a few days after Tally arrived at The Smoke. It depicts him having doubts about whether or not he could trust Tally or not. He also has to fight off the fact that he has taken a liking to Tally, and has to stop himself from getting too attached, as it could jeopardise the future of The Smoke. David realizes this and he tries to think in a different way, however still comes to the conclusion to trust Tally. He then devises a plan to make sure that she is who she appears to be.
In this journal entry, I try to show what David is thinking during the days when Tally first arrives. I want to show how he was sceptical about Tally, but also had other emotions mixed in as well. I also wanted him to be a little over protective of The Smoke and most of all wanted to fully convey his personality and character. I believe that I did that quite well as David doesn't seem bias towards anything, and it seems like he is truly having a debate in his mind on whether or not to trust Tally.
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