Peer
Response
Beauty Is In
the Eye of the Beholder
(Avel
Ivanov)
This is blog
is interesting one to read. I really enjoyed reading it and some of the points
were really intriguing. I especially thought that your view on true beauty was
very interesting. How you explained that beauty is not a set thing and that
everyone has their own way of being beautiful and not everyone's beauty is the
same was very well done and I truly enjoyed reading it. I found your pictures very interesting as
well. They all had a deeper meaning than what they appeared to be, just like
many aspects of this book. They brought many aspects of the true moral of the
story to life. I especially liked the picture of "New Pretty Town" in
the bird cage because that is how the
citizens of New Pretty Town were. They were trapped in their own pretty minded
world unaware of all that was happening around them.
Your writing was also conventionally sound as I did not find any major mistakes in your writing, and there were very view spelling or grammer errors and the ones that were there you fixed. You obviously put a lot of work into this blog and I commend you for that. Good job :)
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